Primary Sources: Alex(Guy driving car) James(Groom) Stacey(Bride)
Secondary Sources: John(Dad) Father Patrick(pastor)
The wedding between James Fitzpatrick and Stacey Johnson took place last Saturday at the Little Rock church in Allendale, California.
"It's was kind of stressed trying to get everything in line for the wedding." Said Stacey Johnson, the bride. "It was a real setback when the margarita machine for the reception broke, but we managed to make due."
Stacey's brother, Alex Johnson, drives down windy roads in Texas.
"I am extremely late for the wedding," Said Alex. "I was supposed to arrive in California on Thursday, due to bad weather, all the flights got cancelled."
The groom and his friends decided to go to Hooters for their celebratory pre-wedding dinner.
"I am totally psyched about the wedding bro," Said James Fitzpatrick, the groom and self proclaimed king of fantasy football. "I ordered this really nice all-white suit, with a red bowtie."
The bride's father, John Johnson, arrived 14 days early for the wedding.
"It's about time Stacey got married," Said John. "When she was 27 and still hadn't found a man, I began to get worried for her. I really hope they don't dilly dally during the reception. I paid for this wedding, and dag nabit if I don't get home by 7:00 I don't ever get to sleep."
At 1:30, guests begin to arrive and file into seats at the church.
"Oh my god. It's 1:30 and I don't see Alex. I'm literally freaking out right now," Said Stacey.
Stacey almost went into shock, but her bridesmaids were able to revive her using coconut scented candles.
"Stacey really needs to chill out," said bridesmaid Emily Baker. "She's a great friend and all, but she over reacts to everything. Like in 11th grade when she failed a test, she punched five teachers and ran around the school naked. It took the custodians five hours to get her down from the roof."
As the wedding began, Alex Johnson finally arrived.
"Stacey looked really shocked and ashamed that I showed up late," Said Alex. "I just tried to calm my breathing and slid into the nearest aisle, and the pastor continued like nothing had happened."
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